Tha passion in me
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Tha passion in me
For that passion, I inspire
For this poetry, I write
The art that I belong to
The verse that I can talk to
To my only pen that I can confess
My weakness and my strength
For my life being so hard
For being sorry for failing to fix things up
For being incapable to see another light
because I’m still trying to have my lovely dreams back
For every moment, I felt down
For every instant, I felt that I can’t go ahead in this life
I’m gonna to say it with the power of words
I still have the passion to write
to write, to express and to survive
I’m gonna to survive no matter what
For this poetry, I write
The art that I belong to
The verse that I can talk to
To my only pen that I can confess
My weakness and my strength
For my life being so hard
For being sorry for failing to fix things up
For being incapable to see another light
because I’m still trying to have my lovely dreams back
For every moment, I felt down
For every instant, I felt that I can’t go ahead in this life
I’m gonna to say it with the power of words
I still have the passion to write
to write, to express and to survive
I’m gonna to survive no matter what
- Spoiler:
It's my last poem!!
I hope you'll leave a comment
Illusion- 7itist
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Date d'inscription : 11/07/2010
Re: Tha passion in me
1ére à se lancer !
joli texte! et très vrai! la passion permet à certains de survivre! et j'ai bien aimer cette phrase:
joli texte! et très vrai! la passion permet à certains de survivre! et j'ai bien aimer cette phrase:
j'éspére avoir l'ocase de lire tes textes et merci pour le partagebecause I’m
still trying to have my lovely dreams
back
Re: Tha passion in me
yes!!
Thank you for passing by
As I write, I'll post incha Allah
Thank you for passing by
As I write, I'll post incha Allah
Illusion- 7itist
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Re: Tha passion in me
Beau poème Illusion
la partie qui m'a plue est :
J'espère que tu nous en posteras d'autres , Bonne continuation
la partie qui m'a plue est :
Illusion a écrit:
To my only pen that I can confess
My weakness and my strength
J'espère que tu nous en posteras d'autres , Bonne continuation
Gossip Girl- Awesome
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Date d'inscription : 12/07/2010
Re: Tha passion in me
Thank you Gossip
me too, I like all my poem but the most the part that you mentioned
me too, I like all my poem but the most the part that you mentioned
Illusion- 7itist
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Re: Tha passion in me
tu écrit très bien. bon courage
Leïla- Kavi
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Date d'inscription : 17/08/2010
Re: Tha passion in me
Leïla a écrit:tu écrit très bien. bon courage
Merci^^
Illusion- 7itist
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